SIREN
Siren is a
screaming word, a
bleeding word, a
needing word.
It lives
in the
place
between
hopeful and hopeless.
Wakes in the night
to answer
the call.
Set fire,
it rushes,
urgent and wailing, a
nightmare, a warning, a
desperate prayer.
screaming word, a
bleeding word, a
needing word.
It lives
in the
place
between
hopeful and hopeless.
Wakes in the night
to answer
the call.
Set fire,
it rushes,
urgent and wailing, a
nightmare, a warning, a
desperate prayer.
© 2015 Michelle Heidenrich Barnes. All rights reserved.
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Nothing says "emergency!" like a siren. Excellent, Michelle! I like the way the shape echoes the sound.
ReplyDeleteThanks Tabatha. It's funny how sometimes a poem feels incomplete until I play around with the shape, then it just falls into place like it was meant to be that way all along!
DeleteI agree, the shape reinforces the feeling too--the up and down of hope. I like the nightmare/prayer rhyme.
ReplyDeleteLove those first words, "a needing" says much. Wonderful word to write about, too.
ReplyDeleteMichelle, That's lovely. xoxo
ReplyDeleteOooop, Michelle. That is really terrific! Thanks for sharing it here.
ReplyDeleteO meant Oooooo, not Oooop.
ReplyDeleteToo bad. I kinda liked oooop. ;)
DeleteNicely done, Michelle.
ReplyDeleteThe shape makes this poem more intriguing. Sirens can be so scary and yes, they are a prayer, and live between hopeful and hopeless. You captured the feeling.
ReplyDeleteThanks so much for your comments everyone!
ReplyDeleteIt made my pulse quicken in panic! Nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Teresa! I was going for a quality of breathlessness. I'm glad that came across for you!
DeleteExcellent job, Michelle. I LOVE the shape. It adds so much. So proud to know you. :-)
ReplyDeleteYou're so sweet, Robyn. I'm proud to know you too! :)
DeleteNice! Right from the beginning with "screaming word, bleeding word, needing word."
ReplyDeleteThis is wonderful, Michelle. And I agree about the shape...it really adds.
ReplyDeleteThanks, Liz and Penny!
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