Tuesday, May 27, 2014

DMC: "Wading" by Monica Gudlewski



Wading
in the small bay,
then suddenly caught up
in a starry silver current -
minnows.

© 2014 Monica Gudlewski.  All rights reserved.


Laura Purdie Salas has challenged us to come up with a water-themed cinquain this month.  (Click HERE for details.)  If you would like to be in the running for a copy of Laura's new book, WATER CAN BE..., use the contact form in the sidebar to the right to send me your splashtastic poem!



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6 comments:

  1. AnonymousMay 27, 2014 at 8:11 AM

    Thanks for the chance to join in, Michelle! I've enjoyed reading everyone's cinquains this month.

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  2. Michelle Heidenrich BarnesMay 27, 2014 at 9:40 AM

    Thank YOU for joining in, Monica! Love "starry silver current" and the rush of excitement that you manage to build in just five lines.

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  3. Margaret SimonMay 27, 2014 at 7:36 PM

    Love the "Starry, silver current" I can see the image clearly.

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  4. AnonymousMay 27, 2014 at 9:25 PM

    I appreciate your reading and sharing your thoughts, Michelle and Margaret. Looking forward to next month's theme...

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  5. Linda BMay 27, 2014 at 9:59 PM

    Oh, I love this, the idea of entering that 'starry, silver current' is wonderful. Thank you Monica, and Michelle!

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  6. catherinemjohnson.comMay 28, 2014 at 6:39 AM

    Lovely, Michelle!

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