Monday, May 5, 2014

DMC: "Log flume" by Kristi Veitenheimer

Log flume
Straddle the seat
Splashing every turn
Anticipating the freefall...

© 2014 Kristi Dee Veitenheimer. All rights reserved.

Laura Purdie Salas has challenged us to come up with a water-themed cinquain this month.  Click HERE for details.  If you would like to join in the fun, use the contact form in the sidebar to the right to send me your splashtastic poem!


  1. Thank you, Kristi, for being our first Ditty of the Month Club participant! Your poem makes me excited for summer. :)

  2. Terrific to see this first one, Michelle. I remember being 'soaked' at a water park one time. The poem took me right there!

  3. I love log flume rides!
    And the anticipation is always the best part of all:>)