Thursday, April 28, 2016

DMC: "Animal Echoes" by Donna JT Smith




ANIMAL ECHOES

I whistle two notes -
I hear in a tree
‘Feee-beee’
Sung to me.

I mimic ‘whoo-whooo’
At night to the owl
That fowl
Returns howl.

I sing to the dog
All frenzied and stout
Lifts her snout
Yaps doubt.

I say ‘hey, there, cat!’
He me-yowls a slur -
His purr -
“Pat my fur.”

Returning a nuzzle
In whinnies or neighs
Are ways
Horse replays.

I speak, they reply
I hear their echoes
Each knows
How it goes.


© 2016 Donna JT Smith. All rights reserved.


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4 comments:

  1. What I love about this, Donna, is how you bring animals and humans together to show the world as a kind and gentle place. The echoes are there connecting us all if we only listen.

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  2. The rhyming play echoes the joyfulness of this poem.

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  3. Love that you took the echoes from all the animals as love ones, Donna.

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  4. Great rhyming and connections between species, echoes of need and love.

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