ECHOES
The drum beats
The sound repeats
Becomes incomplete
Before it retreats
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I love the succinct simplicity of this, Angie. Truly a ditty of an echo!
ReplyDeleteYou've written that drum beat into the poem so well. Love the simple beat/echo!
ReplyDeleteThat would make a perfect reverso poem:
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Before it retreats
Becomes incomplete
The sound repeats
The drum beats
short of like a heart betting beautiful poem
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