Tuesday, October 6, 2015

DMC: "Cat" by Janie Lazo




Cat 

I crave her silky softness
As her slender body moves
Graceful passes so alluring
Still my touch she dares reprove
When I call to her she listens
But to hasten? no not she
Though I beckon - she ignores me
Too aloof to hear my pleas
So I sit alone in silence
I'm no fool, I shall not beg
Then this flighty, flirty, vixen
Soon is rubbing on my leg 


© 2015 Janie Lazo. All rights reserved.


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11 comments:

  1. Perfection! I love the rhythm of this poem. Thanks for sharing it, Michelle.

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  2. Just the perfect picture of a cat, and your rhythm & rhyming tells the story beautifully too.

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  3. Such a well-crafted poem. It draws a cat in a way that a painting can't.

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  4. paints the perfect pic of a cat they all have such
    different personalities you did a beautiful job at defying that

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  5. The first ditty of the month is purr-fection! Brava, Janie! And thanks for sharing, Michelle! =)

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  6. Aw, lovely. Cats always return your love--you just have to be a little patient:>)

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  7. I agree with everyone else, Janie. I especially like the way you set the "flirty vixen" mood with phrases like "silky softness" and "graceful passes." Nicely done!

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  8. My cat is just like this. Affection has to be on her terms only.

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  9. I am happy you enjoyed my poem. Thank you for your kind comments. Thank you Mummy Cat ( and our cat Bellatrix) for the inspiration. Thank you Michelle for sharing. I am looking forward to reading the other submissions!

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