Tuesday, May 20, 2014

DMC: "Metamorphosis" by George Heidenrich


White snow; gray; black
Brings unrest to my heart.
Soft rain and breeze, buds turn to leaves –
Yea! Spring!

© 2014 George A. Heidenrich.  All rights reserved.

Laura Purdie Salas has challenged us to come up with a water-themed cinquain this month.  (Click HERE for details.)  If you would like to be in the running for a copy of Laura's new book, WATER CAN BE..., use the contact form in the sidebar to the right to send me your splashtastic poem!


  1. Nice job! I especially like the second line that shows the passage of time with the darkening snow. Thanks for participating in the challenge this month. :)

  2. I really like that second line also - the passage of time in four words.

  3. Lovely poem, George! This is the perfect poem for Spring 2014--we waited way too long for this one! = )

  4. A lovely celebration poem! Yea, spring!