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Tuesday, May 20, 2014

DMC: "Metamorphosis" by George Heidenrich



Metamorphosis

Waiting.
White snow; gray; black
Brings unrest to my heart.
Soft rain and breeze, buds turn to leaves –
Yea! Spring!


© 2014 George A. Heidenrich.  All rights reserved.


Laura Purdie Salas has challenged us to come up with a water-themed cinquain this month.  (Click HERE for details.)  If you would like to be in the running for a copy of Laura's new book, WATER CAN BE..., use the contact form in the sidebar to the right to send me your splashtastic poem!



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5 comments:

  1. Michelle Heidenrich BarnesMay 20, 2014 at 6:59 AM

    Nice job! I especially like the second line that shows the passage of time with the darkening snow. Thanks for participating in the challenge this month. :)

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  2. AnonymousMay 20, 2014 at 2:38 PM

    I really like that second line also - the passage of time in four words.

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  3. Becky ShillingtonMay 20, 2014 at 4:14 PM

    Lovely poem, George! This is the perfect poem for Spring 2014--we waited way too long for this one! = )

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  4. No Stinkin UltracrepidarianMay 20, 2014 at 9:41 PM

    This winter seemed endless, didn't it?

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  5. Renee LaTulippeMay 22, 2014 at 3:00 AM

    A lovely celebration poem! Yea, spring!

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