In the meantime, today's little ditty was inspired by a memory that I've kept close to my heart for the past seven plus years. It was January, summertime in Sydney, Australia, and the beginning of the school year. My 5 year old was starting Kindergarten. Each morning, we walked up a steep hill on a street lined with Frangipani trees to get to his school. Along the way, he liked to collect the best blossoms from those that had fallen to the ground-- his daily ritual which I accommodated as best I could without being late for the morning bell.
Frangipani
Cradled in his hands
like newborn chicks, Here Mummy,
keep these forever?
© 2013 Michelle
Heidenrich Barnes. All rights reserved.
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What I remember
ReplyDeletewhen I smell frangipani
are those lovely dreams.
Sounds like a nice place to visit! Thanks for sharing.
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Bridget.
DeleteWhat a sweet memory! And now you've done what he asked -- you've kept those blooms forever (in words and a picture).
ReplyDeleteYes, it definitely comes as somewhat of a relief to get it down on paper. I remember when it happened, thinking to myself, you must never forget this moment. I've said that same thing on other occasions, but those memories have since turned to mist. Thanks so much for your comment, Mary Lee.
DeleteLove the chick imagery! I love haiku--would love to come back in the future and share one...
ReplyDeleteThanks Laura-- I'll be in touch. :)
DeleteI love your haiku, Michelle! And I, too, would enjoy sharing a haiku on your blog. Just let me know more. :~)
ReplyDeleteWonderful! I'll be in touch in a few weeks.
DeleteThanks so much for sending me the link, Michelle. Those heart-melting moments are forever etched in our hearts. I'm so glad you captured this one with a poem.
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