"Beast" by KetsukiKyuu |
On Tuesday I featured my contribution to this month's DMC challenge, a poem called Before the Last Petal Falls. (You can read it HERE.)
I'm not going to lie— this one was a struggle.
Josée Holland Eclipse |
But as any creative practitioner knows, when ideas are scarce, borrow someone else's as a jumping-off point. Eventually I turned to one of the classic unrequited-becomes-requited love stories: Beauty and the Beast. Fancying myself a champion of flawed characters, I told the story from the Beast's perspective. My interpretation is based on scenes from the popular Disney version, though I also researched the original version from 1740 by Madame Gabrielle–Suzanne de Villeneuve.
Here's something interesting I picked up from author Susanna Barlow's analysis of the fairy tale:
All of us seem to have a part of ourselves that we do not like, that feels like a beast of some kind. That side of us tends to be unpredictable and untamed. Because it is big and powerful we tend to lock it up and refuse to face it. We are, both, drawn to our primordial selves and repelled by it. Sometimes we hide it like the hunchback in the tower or we cover it with a mask like the phantom. Other times we run from it like Jane Eyre and Ann Darrow who are terrified of either the consequences of their feelings or the wild creature itself. Other times we are simply intrigued like Jane was with Tarzan.
jack-the-pmpkn-queen (click to enlarge) |
to heed the call of the Beast.
Any "beast" will do.
Halloween-inspired ditties are welcome.
The only catch is that you need to limit yourself to five words (plus title, if you like).
As I did last year, I will supply you with fifteen words from my handy-dandy magnetic horror poetry set. (Thanks, Tabatha!) You may use these words, or not, as you please—they are offered as inspiration only.
Leave your five-word beastie in the comments and I will move it up to the main body of the post where they can all play together. Just promise me you won't stress over it— it's only five words, after all. I'll start us off...
AUSSIE ENCOUNTER
Not
Red Riding Hood's
huntsman
~ Michelle Heidenrich Barnes
Here's a photo of a huntsman spider.
For those a bit more adventurous, here's a short video.
* * * * *
Ancient fire
summons
demon lies.
summons
demon lies.
~ Margaret Simon
* * * * *
CONQUERING WRITER'S BLOCK
Wildly wielded bludgeon
Whacks procrastination
Wildly wielded bludgeon
Whacks procrastination
~ Tabatha Yeatts
and another, more seasonal beastie...
For frighteninger Frankensteins,
add fangs
~ Tabatha Yeatts
* * * * *
TOOTHBRUSHING TIME
Gargoyle gurgles,
sloshing loathsome spittle
~ Buffy Silverman
* * * * *
MINIMALIST
Skeleton:
all bones
no skin.
Skeleton:
all bones
no skin.
~ Diane Mayr
* * * * *
LOATHSOME JACK
Hunger unleashed!
Toothless grin.
Chomp!
~ Carol Varsalona
Here's a picture of Loathsome Jack (created from a live squash).
* * * * *
Evening Ghouls
Gnawing,
Rotten Flesh.
~ Iphigene at Gathering Books
* * * * *
HELLO-BOO
Olive-eyed spiders
Spinning
Jack-o-lantern
Smiles
and
OCTOBERRR NIGHTS
Candy-corn drizzle’s
Glowing under
Snapdragon-moon
~ Jessica Bigi
* * * * *
OBLIVION
Eerie shadow
Clenched teeth
Knocking
~ Leane Gill
* * * * *
TEMPER TANTRUM
Chew me out.
Tasty guts.
~ Jama Rattigan
* * * * *
BEASTLY GENEALOGY
Dragon Lady
begot
Tuba Beast
~ cbhanek
Read the story behind this ditty here.
* * * * *
Loathsome fangs
stalk
ancient hunger
~ Matt Forrest Esenwine
* * * * *
VAMPIRE BAT
Fangs
too sharp
to feel.
~ Liz Steinglass
* * * * *
Computer Demons
Devour our time...
~ Michelle Kogan
* * * * *
Gnashing fangs
rip the darkness.
~ Rosi Hollinbeck
* * * * *
Gruesome Ghoulies-
Freaks of Nature
and
Off With Their Heads!
CHOP
~ Janie Lazo
LOATHSOME JACK
Hunger unleashed!
Toothless grin.
Chomp!
~ Carol Varsalona
Here's a picture of Loathsome Jack (created from a live squash).
* * * * *
Evening Ghouls
Gnawing,
Rotten Flesh.
~ Iphigene at Gathering Books
* * * * *
HELLO-BOO
Olive-eyed spiders
Spinning
Jack-o-lantern
Smiles
and
OCTOBERRR NIGHTS
Candy-corn drizzle’s
Glowing under
Snapdragon-moon
~ Jessica Bigi
* * * * *
OBLIVION
Eerie shadow
Clenched teeth
Knocking
~ Leane Gill
* * * * *
TEMPER TANTRUM
Chew me out.
Tasty guts.
~ Jama Rattigan
* * * * *
BEASTLY GENEALOGY
Dragon Lady
begot
Tuba Beast
~ cbhanek
Read the story behind this ditty here.
* * * * *
Loathsome fangs
stalk
ancient hunger
~ Matt Forrest Esenwine
* * * * *
VAMPIRE BAT
Fangs
too sharp
to feel.
~ Liz Steinglass
* * * * *
Computer Demons
Devour our time...
~ Michelle Kogan
* * * * *
Gnashing fangs
rip the darkness.
~ Rosi Hollinbeck
* * * * *
Gruesome Ghoulies-
Freaks of Nature
and
Off With Their Heads!
CHOP
~ Janie Lazo
Two reminders before you go:
Last call for Ditty of the Month Club poems! Next Friday will be our wrap-up celebration and MUMMY CAT giveaway. Besides my own, this week's featured poems were by Teresa Robeson and Leane Gill.
Be sure to stop by Jama's Alphabet Soup for a sweet treat and this week's Poetry Friday Roundup.
Gross! Not the post or poem, of course! Gross is that huntsman spider. After feasting my eyes on Jama's delicious-looking site, I'm sorry my curiosity got the better of me; I'm sorry I clicked on that photo:) Gross! ...In all seriousness, thank you, Michelle, for your DOM poem and its back story. I especially appreciated the research that you undertook; this post would be especially valuable for students to see how research informs creative work. (I need to reread the fairy tale analysis excerpt you quoted.) Not only are you an accomplished poet with meaty wrap-around posts, but your understated sense of humor always functions like an after-dinner delectable dessert. Thank you for the "beasty" challenge. As you said, it's a piece of cake--only 5 words, after all:) God bless!
ReplyDeleteThanks for such a thoughtful comment, cb. Hope you'll come back with your 5-word beastie!
DeleteAncient fire
ReplyDeletesummons
demon lies.
Don't mess with those demons!
DeleteConquering Writer's Block
ReplyDeleteWildly wielded bludgeon
Whacks procrastination
What I want to know is where can I get one of those procrastination bludgeons! I think you better apply for the patent, Tabatha, before someone else does.
DeleteToothbrushing Time
ReplyDeleteGargoyle gurgles,
sloshing loathsome spittle
How darling! Does he floss too?
DeleteFun challenge for today!
ReplyDeleteMinimalist
Skeleton:
all bones
no skin.
Well done on getting to the core of this challenge, Diane. ;)
DeleteAnother fun creative challenge that I just had to try. Of course, I added a digital creation but the poem itself is:
ReplyDeleteLoathsome Jack
Hunger unleashed!
Toothless grin.
Chomp!
You can find my post with the digital monster (created from a live squash) and the poem at http://beyondliteracylink.blogspot.com/2015/10/beastie-ready-for-lunch-invited-to.html.
I'm impressed. You whip out those digital creations like they were nothing, Carol. Well done!
DeleteLovely poems very apt for Halloween. I'm intrigued and so I shall try, here's mine:
ReplyDeleteEvening Ghouls
Gnawing,
Rotten Flesh.
So happy you stopped by with your ghoulfriend, Iphigene. ;)
DeleteStench- I love that word.
ReplyDeleteWill haunt you with an entry - later.
If not sooner.
Such fun!
Jan, I have half a mind to use "Stench– I love that word" for your five-word ditty. Seriously... it works for me! ;)
DeleteOblivion
ReplyDeleteEerie shadow
Clenched teeth
Knocking
Ahhh! Such suspense!
DeleteWhat a fun fall party going on in here today I love everyone poems so festive for the season :)
ReplyDeleteLove those creepy "olive-eyed spiders," Jessica. My huntsman spider thanks you for the company!
DeleteThank you I was wondering if these are also copyrighted under our names
DeleteYes, they are, Jessica. Even though I don't include a formal statement re: copyright for the Five for Friday poem parties, you retain copyright for ANYTHING you submit to Today's Little Ditty.
DeleteTEMPER TANTRUM
ReplyDeleteChew me out.
Tasty guts.
Eww!! Jama! Mr. Cornelius would be shocked.
DeleteI decided to work with just the words you provided...
ReplyDeleteLoathsome fangs
stalk
ancient hunger
Well done, Matt!
DeleteFun! I'll see what I can stir up!
ReplyDeleteVampire Bat
ReplyDeleteFangs
too sharp
to feel.
Scary, Liz!!
DeleteOh my, Liz. This one seriously gives me the willies.
DeleteI was struck by a demon while reading this challenge, here it is...
ReplyDeleteComputer Demons
Devour our time...
Chillingly accurate, Michelle!
DeleteOh yes! I know these demons all too well, I'm afraid.
DeleteThis is hard -- only five words. This is the best I can do.
ReplyDeleteGnashing fangs
rip the darkness.
IMHO, Rosi, "the best you can do" is pretty darn awesome! I can hear those fangs gnashing and ripping the black of night.
DeleteGruesome Ghoulies-
ReplyDeleteFreaks of Nature
Yikes! Sure hope I never meet one in person.
DeleteOh my gosh - these are all terrific! What a great challenge and responses. I'll try to sit in one place for more than five minutes next year and join the fun. Kudos all around... :0)
ReplyDeleteFair enough, Robyn. Fortunately, your awesome 5-word ditty from last year will hold me over....
Deleteditties
splatter
across the page
Still loving that one!
Off With Their Heads!
ReplyDeleteCHOP
Find yourself a Queen of Hearts costume and you'll be all set for Halloween, Janie. ;)
DeleteWhat a wonderfully talented group! If you haven't watched the trailer for "Pride & Prejudice & Zombies," you should. I couldn't watch the whole movie, but the trailer was perfectly horrible in the most delightful way! xoxo
ReplyDeleteHa! Just watched it. Good golly, Miss Molly... what a mash-up!
DeleteKnow the official 5-word deal expired, Michelle, but once those creative juices start flowing....2 Beasties, Squeezed--this week's Poetry Friday squeezed poems: http://cbhanek.com/2015/10/30/2-beasties-squeezed/
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