Tuesday, June 16, 2015

DMC: "Planning Your Treehouse" by Michelle H. Barnes




Planning Your Treehouse

When building a treehouse you need to be clever,
so making a plan is a useful endeavor:

  • The walls should be strong like a tough armadillo.
  • The floor should be soft, like your favorite pillow.
  • No need for a roof, since the rain won’t affect you.
    (Your leafy umbrella will always protect you.)
  • Now this is important– the last thing you’ll need
    is a shelf full of books so there’s plenty to read.

© 2015 Michelle Heidenrich Barnes. All rights reserved.


Corey Rosen Schwartz has challenged us to write a stanza or two about building a treehouse, using unpredictable rhymes of more than one syllable. Click HERE for all the details.

Send your stanzas to TodaysLittleDitty (at) gmail (dot) com, or use the contact form in the sidebar to the right. All contributions will be included in a wrap-up celebration on Friday, June 26th, and one lucky participant will win a personalized copy of Corey's delightful new picture book:




19 comments:

  1. Ooo, I like a treehouse that's as soft as a pillow!

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    1. I confess, I'm not very hardcore when it comes to roughing it. ;)

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  2. There was a tree at my grandparents' house where my grandfather built a little platform, not really a house, but someplace I could go to sit and read. Your poem took me there, with pillow soft & books to read. Wonderful, Michelle!

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    1. Delighted to help bring back those memories for you, Linda. Sounds wonderful!

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  3. "The walls should be strong like a tough armadillo." What a hoot! The perfect plan.

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    1. Too bad most of the armadillos I see 'round these parts are roadkill. They may need to be just a tad tougher.

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  4. This is wonderful, Michelle--love it. My favorite line is: your leafy umbrella will always protect you. Looking forward to reading Moose--who doesn't want their very own treehouse!!

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    1. Thanks, Maria. :) This book is sure to be a big hit with the kiddos. I see plush moose(s?) in Corey's future!

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  5. Sounds muc better than the one you had. Too bad we didn't have your plans then. Sorry!

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    1. Nah. The one we had was perfect! As I recall, the floor was particularly soft the year of the tent caterpillar invasion. ;)

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  6. I love this one! The walls strong as a tough armadillo is just so clever and I think your rhymes are interesting and perfect. I need to get caught up on your blog and maybe try my hand at this. It's a fun challenge.

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    1. Thanks so much, Rosi. Would love to see what you come up with for this challenge! It's not an easy one, that's for sure.

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  7. Great poem Michelle!!! I'm coming to your tree house, love the books at the end especially!

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  8. Great tree house you created there, Michelle!

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    1. Thanks, Catherine. I only wish I had a suitable tree in my yard to make it a reality!

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  9. I love this, Michelle! You definitely had some unpredictable rhymes :-)

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  10. Love "tough armadillo" and "favorite pillow." And of course the books. I'm ready to visit this treehouse!

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  11. So fun! I love this little treehouse poem. And the use of armadillo/pillow!

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