tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post2777005668616283660..comments2024-03-25T01:44:23.502-04:00Comments on Today's Little Ditty: Day 4 of the 2018 Kidlitosphere Progressive PoemMichelle Heidenrich Barneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-136705830548563162018-04-15T07:12:31.805-04:002018-04-15T07:12:31.805-04:00I am coming around quite late, and it is actually ...I am coming around quite late, and it is actually such fun to be able to read more than one line! Your clever use of flower/girl name is generous and fun and adds a sweet scent to our setting. xxAmy LVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-81880745532549922102018-04-05T21:00:32.741-04:002018-04-05T21:00:32.741-04:00Love following this, love reading this...hate wait...Love following this, love reading this...hate waiting...Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-86137482310791299052018-04-05T11:49:11.842-04:002018-04-05T11:49:11.842-04:00GORGEOUS. Gorgeous. Did I mention, Gorgeous? An...GORGEOUS. Gorgeous. Did I mention, Gorgeous? And the underlying scent of jasmine gives it even more richness... Now off to see where Jan has taken everything!Robyn Hood Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07279289715664168026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-91589571675181191162018-04-05T06:35:24.947-04:002018-04-05T06:35:24.947-04:00no way of knowing.... no way of knowing.... jan godown anninohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00091996699597066230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-89345606658451378022018-04-05T06:34:51.441-04:002018-04-05T06:34:51.441-04:00You!
Dear Michelle, I don't know what I would ...You!<br />Dear Michelle, I don't know what I would have done with the Day 5 line, without your naming our seed. And Jasmine! You have know way of knowing that is the very beloved vine entwined around our mailbox & back yard. With the opening gift line of Liz, through Jane & Laura's lilting words, <br />& now yours, this poem is birthed in beauty & promise. <br />Here is the URL to Day 5, for following readers: https://bookseedstudio.wordpress.com/2018/04/05/2018-april-poetry-month-progressive-poem-day-5/<br />jan godown anninohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00091996699597066230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-45218841239192617432018-04-05T04:21:20.288-04:002018-04-05T04:21:20.288-04:00I thoroughly enjoyed reading about your wandering ...I thoroughly enjoyed reading about your wandering thought process that led you to your line. I think you struck the perfect note, somewhere between dream and waking, that will hopefully get this seed up and at 'em and into some adventure. :D Renee LaTulippehttp://www.nowaterriver.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-69370940669196593272018-04-05T00:29:30.494-04:002018-04-05T00:29:30.494-04:00Love this! The poem, the thought process, your lin...Love this! The poem, the thought process, your line! What a treat!Sherry Howardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04326605891373049617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-86935859085157236872018-04-04T19:42:40.677-04:002018-04-04T19:42:40.677-04:00I was pondering the night blooming flowers also–I&...I was pondering the night blooming flowers also–I've grown evening primrose and Moon flowers, which actually are very similar to Jasmine but they are huge like the Moon–and they look like stars too. But with Jasmine you've a double bonus a name and a lovely scent. Thanks for your choice of night bloom Jasmine! Your rhythmic "pulse of a thousand stars," reminds me of the aurora borealis, I wonder if any one will go there…Michelle Koganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02575814872372518994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-75343270546582985182018-04-04T18:08:58.452-04:002018-04-04T18:08:58.452-04:00That was how I read it, Matt; 'with'. I wa...That was how I read it, Matt; 'with'. I was feeling a silly that I'd read it wrong - so I'm glad you can see it, too. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-81130409437468262252018-04-04T17:26:39.900-04:002018-04-04T17:26:39.900-04:00We think alike . . . I also thought about night bl...We think alike . . . I also thought about night blooming flowers when I read Laura's line. And not a gardener myself, I would have turned to google too. Maybe we all need to visit Margaret so smell her jasmine. I can't wait to see what happens next. Just a few more lines and it will be turn.Ramonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15929914252480696798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-4133158956424904462018-04-04T16:45:48.242-04:002018-04-04T16:45:48.242-04:00Michelle, you have provided the poem with another ...Michelle, you have provided the poem with another sense, the scent of Jasmine along with another evening movement in the sky. I can imagine the stars pulsating to a beat of midnight twinkle. This poem is now turning into a visual delight and I can't wait to see what comes next. Carol Varsalonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589714711155938528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-64826679380485979542018-04-04T16:07:31.692-04:002018-04-04T16:07:31.692-04:00Very clever! Your sweet Jasmine is made of stars h...Very clever! Your sweet Jasmine is made of stars herself. Serendipity!<br />Tabathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14367572663591077922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-23886046230387874192018-04-04T12:52:41.210-04:002018-04-04T12:52:41.210-04:00Oh that Jasmine--dancing with stars! Love the star...Oh that Jasmine--dancing with stars! Love the start of this poem, which is still open to so many possibilities, and eager to see where it turns next.Buffy Silvermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07223895917772531703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-7915002284383682172018-04-04T11:54:53.183-04:002018-04-04T11:54:53.183-04:00Wow! I am so inspired by where this is going! Danc...Wow! I am so inspired by where this is going! Dancing in the moonlight, to the beat of the stars, filling the air with the scent of jasmine, what a luscious scene we are creating! Jane @ www.raincitylibrarian.cahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12721142460522914540noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-63491621908813959112018-04-04T11:10:47.871-04:002018-04-04T11:10:47.871-04:00I purposely have not looked at the other comments ...I purposely have not looked at the other comments yet! I absolutely love your line and how you explained your thinking, your prediction (twist) etc. Brava, Michelle. Jasmine, terrific choice. And dancing with those pulsing stars glittering above. I would aim to write such a line, but worry that I would not come close....brilliant like the stars, your line.<br />Janet Clare F.skanny17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07488350213473016250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-72320589185638947722018-04-04T10:55:50.070-04:002018-04-04T10:55:50.070-04:00Such a strong line - visually and emotionally. It&...Such a strong line - visually and emotionally. It's also possible the seed is "with" sweet Jasmine, and could be another type of seed, so I'm eager to see where this goes.Matt Forrest Esenwinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04230063389130167424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-50501431816268327632018-04-04T10:08:10.375-04:002018-04-04T10:08:10.375-04:00What wonderful words! So often the words we hear t...What wonderful words! So often the words we hear to describe music in relation to the stars connotes high pitch. The word "pulse" makes me think of a drum or bass beat. Thanks for your wonderful addition!Sarah Grace Tuttlehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11670154466818525636noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-63583597003271972842018-04-04T09:18:02.494-04:002018-04-04T09:18:02.494-04:00I've only smelled night jasmine at a nursery a...I've only smelled night jasmine at a nursery and envy you, Margaret; it is heavenly. Thus, Michelle, you've connected that night sky so beautifully with another wonder in the night. I enjoyed reading your thoughts, too. It's a wonderful line to add to the story of ?. Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-46175340689473579722018-04-04T08:54:38.352-04:002018-04-04T08:54:38.352-04:00I love seeing the thought process for your line. I...I love seeing the thought process for your line. It fits perfectly. I look forward to the rest.David McMullinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11976625439508466025noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-31069469814855860962018-04-04T08:25:00.730-04:002018-04-04T08:25:00.730-04:00Awww, sweet Jasmine and her stars! LOVE your thoug...Awww, sweet Jasmine and her stars! LOVE your thought process, Michelle! Great character building. :) Beautiful! xoIrene Lathamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04905936104127707762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-84633295955513976292018-04-04T08:12:47.623-04:002018-04-04T08:12:47.623-04:00Now you've got me wanting to experience night ...Now you've got me wanting to experience night blooming jasmine. I guess I'll have to visit Margaret on the teche.Diane Mayrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09767689319000732296noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-13194348948540705482018-04-04T07:41:30.062-04:002018-04-04T07:41:30.062-04:00Oh, bravo, Michelle! You accomplished much in thos...Oh, bravo, Michelle! You accomplished much in those eight magical words. Welcome to the world, Jasmine! I can't wait to see where she'll be on April 18, my day to join her on her journey. xxChristie Wymanhttps://wonderingandwondering.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-19655272315008508652018-04-04T07:41:05.046-04:002018-04-04T07:41:05.046-04:00Thank you for the extended back story via your res...Thank you for the extended back story via your research!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-12820358544610727592018-04-04T07:19:27.303-04:002018-04-04T07:19:27.303-04:00Ah, Michelle, I have night blooming jasmine in my ...Ah, Michelle, I have night blooming jasmine in my yard and the smell is glorious. I love that you've included her in the poem. Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5740307479750463845.post-26944326738362992782018-04-04T06:57:04.717-04:002018-04-04T06:57:04.717-04:00Michelle! This is beautiful! A thousand times bett...Michelle! This is beautiful! A thousand times better than any thoughts I had in my head...lovelovelove!laurasalashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13807781795919555208noreply@blogger.com